I appreciate that your joy followed the same theme throughout. The end was too abrupt. At a minimum you need a fade out with the picture and music. To take it to the next level of joy, the viewer would want to see you enjoying the savings. You could be eating/using one of the products you saved money on or you could be happily counting the money you saved.
I appreciate that your joy followed the same theme throughout. The end was too abrupt. At a minimum you need a fade out with the picture and music. To take it to the next level of joy, the viewer would want to see you enjoying the savings. You could be eating/using one of the products you saved money on or you could be happily counting the money you saved.
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